Hi
I wrote about the Jungle. I use tools to help me do it. I use agitves,verbs. but I did not finsh it.
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, October 25, 2019
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Hi Cameron!remember me and Hakeem? well, anyway! i love you post because you probably tried your best an your best is the best! i like how you wrote about the jungle. and how much time do you have to finish this story? anyway, miss you! byee!
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ReplyDeleteI like you wrote about the jungel because i like climbing trees.
I also did jungel writing.
How about doing spell check.
Did you put in captils?