I tried to describe the character in my book. I tried to add what they did, what felt, what they did and what they think.
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, March 25, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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good job!
ReplyDeleteCamron please can you do more sentenses.
you leveled up in the magnificents for that writing!
From Sonny.
Hey Camron!
ReplyDeleteI like your writing!
you even did more writing then taylor.
From Sonny.